The Clock Strikes at Midnight
by Joan
C. Curtis
Blurb:
The Clock Strikes Midnight is a race against time in a quest for
revenge and atonement. This is a story about hate, love, betrayal and
forgiveness.
If you found out you had only 3 months to live, what would you do?
That’s the question Janie Knox faces in this fast-paced mystery full of
uncertainty and tension that will surprise you until the very last page.
Hiding behind the façade of a normal life, Janie keeps her family
secrets tucked inside a broken heart. Everything changes on the day she learns
she’s going to die. With the clock ticking and her time running out, she rushes
to finish what she couldn’t do when she was 17—destroy her mother’s killer. But
she can’t do it alone.
Janie returns to her childhood home to elicit help from her
sister. She faces more than she bargained for when she discovers her sister’s
life in shambles. Meanwhile her mother’s convicted killer, her stepfather,
recently released from prison, blackmails the sisters and plots to extract
millions from the state in retribution. New revelations challenge Janie’s
resolve, but she refuses to allow either time or her enemies to her stop her
from uncovering the truth she’s held captive for over 20 years.
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GUEST POST
First Sentences
That Hook Readers
I respect the
writer who can grab his or her readers in that very first sentence. Often I
underline the first sentence just to see what hooked me. What is it about the
first sentence that is so important? As writers, we know that publishers and
agents rarely read past the first sentence. If that sentence does not grab,
they go on to the next manuscript.
Here are some
ways to grab your readers in the first sentence
1) Show place or
character in a way that makes the reader want to read more.
2) Establish a
plot point that makes the reader curious.
3) Write in the
show not tell mode (although many of the older writers tell in the first
sentence)
4) Surprise the
reader.
Here's an example
of a powerful first sentence. "I confess that when first I made the
acquaintance with Charles Strickland, I never for a moment discerned that there
was in him anything out of the ordinary."
Do you recognize
that sentence? It's from Moon and Sixpence by
Somerset Maugham. Notice how the narrator intrigues us. As a reader I wonder
who is this Charles Strickland who seemed ordinary but wasn't.
How about this
one from a less famous author, "On the day of the miracle, Isabel was
kneeling at the cliff's edge, tending the small, newly made driftwood
cross."
My gosh, how
powerful is that? What miracle? Cross? Has someone died? So many questions for
the reader to ponder. This came from The Light Between the Oceans by M.L. Stedman.
This one goes a
bit beyond the first sentence, but still hooked me. "A woman is sitting
before an art nouveau vanity, brushing her hair in the mirror. It is, at least
according to the police report, somewhere between midnight and three in the
morning. . ." Yep, I was hooked. Notice how this one not only creates plot
curiosity but also is written in the "show" not tell mode.
That came from Light in the Ruins by Chris Bohjalian.
Here’s the first
sentence in The Clock Strikes Midnight.
“It’s a fast
growing tumor, Miss Knox,” Dr. Mills told Janie.
Did I grab you?
Wanna read more?
About the Author
Joan
Curtis authored four business books published by Praeger Press. She is also
published numerous stories, including:
• Butterflies in a Strawberry Jar, Sea
Oats Review, Winter, 2004
• A Memoir Of A Friend, Chicken Soup for the Working Woman’s
Soul, 2003
and Flint River Review, 1996
• Jacque’s Story in From Eulogy to Joy,
2002
• The Roommate, Whispering Willow
Mystery Magazine, April 1997
• A Special Sort of Stubbornness,
Reader’s Digest, March 1997,
• My Father’s Final Gift, Reader
Digest, November 1994
Her
first place writing awards include : Best mystery manuscript in the Malice
Domestic Grants competition, best proposal for a nonfiction piece in the
Harriette Austin competition, and best story, Butterflies in a Strawberry Jar
in the Cassell Network of Freelance Writer’s Association.
Other
Books:
Hire
Smart and Keep ‘Em: How to Interview Strategically Using POINT, Praeger Press,
an imprint of ABC-Clio, Santa Barbara, CA 2012.
The
New Handshake: Sales Meets Social Media, Praeger Press, 2010, an imprint of
ABC-Clio, Santa Barbara, CA
Managing
Sticky Situations at Work: Communication Secrets for Success in the Workplace,
2009, Praeger Press, an imprint of ABC-Clio, Santa Barbara, CA.
Strategic
Interviewing: Skills for Savvy Executives, 2000 published by Quorum Books,
Greenwood Press.
“I
write about characters who remind me of myself at times and my sister at times,
but never fully so. My stories are told from a woman’s point of view.
Characters drive my writing and my reading.”
Having
grown up in the South with a mother from Westchester County New York, Joan has
a unique take on blending the southern traditions with the eye of a
northerner. She spent most of her
childhood in North Carolina and now resides in Georgia.
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ReplyDeleteJoan, I think first lines and first pages are important beyond any rational explanation. It was brought home to me by Scottish author and Whitbread winner Hugh Scott when he talked to my writers' club. His wonderful book, Why Weeps the Brogan is now out of print, I think, but its first page is what I aspire to every time I write a first page. My own fav of my own, if you follow, is "I trust, ma'am, you will not scream." anne stenhouse
ReplyDeleteI love that first line, Anne. It definitely makes me want to keep reading. Bravo!
DeleteI love the discussion of first lines. It's always interesting to see behind the curtain into the writer's thinking. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteHi Joan,
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite first lines is from the story I just finished reading (not for the first time):
"Marley was dead, to begin with."
But then, what can you say, it's "A Christmas Carol" by Dickens. ;-)
Have a great day! :-)
Dickens was a master at first lines and cliff-hangers (the term came from Dickens--Pickwick Papers). He also has the very famous first line. "It was the best of times and the worst of times," from, of course the Tale of Two Cities.
DeleteHaving not read The Christmas Carol in a long time, I really appreciated this reminder of another great first line!
I enjoyed the guest post.
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed learning about the book. Thanks for sharing it.
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ReplyDeleteI liked that it was both interesting and informative. I also liked the frankness specific to publishers many times not getting past the first sentence. I can relate to this as a reader as well.
ReplyDeletelove the excerpt
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